I had a very humble start in sailing. My first few boats were foam monohulls. I still sail them and they are fun.
Like tominpa said, tie the end of the sheet to the hoop on top, not on the bottom. I'm sure a 2:1 is plenty for this small sail. Also I would replace the carabiner clip with something that swivels. I would not hesitate to use a hardware store grade swivel. Actually, given the low loads that sail will generate, you could use a little pigtail of rope there. Tie a bowline around the bottom of the block, pull the rope through the loop on the crossbeam, and tie a stopper knot to attach it. That would let it swivel so you could pull the sheet in from either side.
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Bryan in Poplar Grove, IL
Supercat 17, unknown year. Future project
Hobie 16, 1977 - died a spectacular death
https://youtu.be/Y7O22bp2MVA
Hobie 16, 1978 - current boat
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